Friday, July 15, 2011

Help me check any grammatical errors and structures regarding my sentences, thanks?

I remember that first time I haa a date with a boy at a corner KFC. When I met the boy whom I carried a torch for him, I gave him a special gift, which is set eight bottle caps of cola on the table and set a shape like heart; The date on the all of bottle caps was his natal day. He smiled of joyful when he saw this gift. The following day I went to the his school, at that time was on vacation, so no student in the school, I stole into his classroom secretly, and found his seat, to stole his photo from his writing case, I did not expect when I left to got on the bus I was bleeding at the nose as a result of I too excited.

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