Sunday, July 10, 2011
Can a native speaker of English check structure and grammar of the sentences, thanks?
I remember the first time I had a date with a boy at a local KFC restaurant. When I met the boy, whom I had fall in love with him secretly, I gave him a special gift. The gift was a set of eight bottle caps from cola bottle lids, set out in the shape of a heart on the table. The date on all the bottle caps was his birth date. He smiled joyfully when he saw this gift. The following day I went to his school, he was on vacation at the time so there was no students at the school. I sneaked into his classroom and once I found his seat I secretly stole his photograph from his writing case. I did not expect to find I was bleeding from the nose as a result of excitement when I got on the bus.
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